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All these murders.
These killings must end.
And I will be the one to end them.
One person, I am sure.
Hundreds of victims, perhaps,
But only one killer.
Hundreds of victims.
Hundreds of criminals.
But no matter.
A victim is a victim,
Just as a murder is a murder.
But this killer is clever.
As clever as I am myself.
A tough opponent.
One that I must bring down.
These killings cannot continue.
Some people see these killings as righteous.
The only victims so far are, after all, criminals.
But they do not see things the way that I do.
They do not understand.
Not at all.
These killings, these murders,
Are not righteous.
The crime rates have gone down,
As I must admit,
But that does not make these killings right.
Far from it.
But I will catch this killer.
I am justice.
And justice will prevail.
Alright, so I got addicted to Death Note and ended up writing this. L is awesome!!!
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CanIhavecakeplease Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its like you read my mind
*very nice love the poem and yes L is awesome*
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Some-One-To-Love Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really Good :nana:
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DeadAvenged Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:jawdrop: epic
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Mushroom1337 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I can really see L saying this. Really good work here. Its awesomee xD
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thelostkitten Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
L kicks ass >.< he so so awesome! XD anyway i love the poem
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spazzmonkey37 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008
zomg! YAY L!
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Skulls-And-Kisses Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008
Quite a speach! :D
I could actually hear L saying this just by how well you kept to his character, amazing work :thumbsup:
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2008
Thanks. it's kind of hard to stay in character sometimes. I'm glad you thought I did it well.
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Skulls-And-Kisses Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2008
Did it well, you prformed it awesome :D
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DeathEdward Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2008
I can hear L saying that. =D
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romance-of-darkness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
oh my god. I've read many but this one's THE one!! ^^
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
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romance-of-darkness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
not like LOVE :D
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
thanks so much! I never thought anyone would ever LOVE my poems that much.
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romance-of-darkness Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
awe sweetie
who doesn't I will smack them to the ground
muahaha (sorry weird moment there:D)
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008
that's ok. i' sure you're forgiven by everyone.;)
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RenSpencer Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008
This.Is.Awesome!!!!!!

XD
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
Thanks....I tried my best......sorta.
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Kayley-Wulf Featured By Owner May 29, 2008
TwT i agree, everyword!! L would be so proud...
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squeaker2121 Featured By Owner May 31, 2008
Thanks! I'm still trying to find out where everyone finds this poem, because I know it's not in popular.
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lovemizuki Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
Excellent! L couldn't have said it better himself!
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1028399 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
good job
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PS2girl Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007
YAY L!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ibiki-fangirl Featured By Owner May 31, 2008   Writer
yeah, l... droooolllll
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PS2girl Featured By Owner May 31, 2008
Tell me about it. :drool:
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